Hot air balloon

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is my writing because I feel like I am going in a real balloon. I need to improve on full stops.

One morning I woke up and ate breakfast as quick as I could because it was my big day. It was not Monday
or any ordinary day, it was my hot air balloon race day. The colours of my balloon were blue and green
blended in. I brought with me my whole family. I packed 3 chip packets, 6 water bottles and some kind of
dry food. When we got there someone shouted out, “it is time for the race to begin!” So we got ready.
“Ready, set, go!” We race to the sky first. When we got up there the clouds felt soft like a teddy bear.  
1 minute later we had some chips.

Then we talked, “Mum are we going to win?”

“Maybe, only if we do not give up.”

Later in the morning I felt quite sick. I also did not know how high I was in the sky.

Next morning I was looking around, someone else was in the lead. He shouted, “I'm in the lead.”
Next time we might win. “Yeah,” I shouted. “But we won't,” said mum, “if we don't stop them from getting
in front of us again.” Next night we were in the lead. “Yeah yeah yeah, we win!” The whole crowd shouted
for us. We went home and instead of putting our trophy that we got on the shelf, we had ice cream in it in
the hot air balloon.